this reminds me much of our fires here not so very long ago. Sorry it's
happening over there as well (again).
Not good, but thanks for the write and read.
Frank, not good, but mostly natural unless you want to consider whether
global warming is man-caused (I think some of both.)
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Usually your poetry leaves something more for the reader, is more subtle. I
am not sure this is poetry, Gary. It just tells too much. At least in my
opinion poetry should suggest, leave a few doors partially open so the
reader can
imaginatively participate.
This presents everything, so I have nothing to do. That is the only way I
know how to describe what is missing. The details are there, but the poetry
isn't, at least not for me. Hope you won't be offended at my bluntness.
Sue
Sue, I suspect it is poetry. is it quality?
I don't know. Some like this kind of bit, others dislike to the max.
Me, I take what shows, but suspect that I need to get my sea legs back.
Smiles and thanks for reads.
Gary
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