Hi Sally,
Yes, a story/narrative poem. It's what I most prefer to do much of the
time - using perhaps greater economy than might be the case with prose, but
a short story nonetheless.
Thanks for commenting and I'm very glad you enjoyed the visit.
Cheers,
Frank
> Hi Frank. You are telling a story here in your poem a narrative which
takes
> us on a journey rather than the instant snap of a poem which is in the
here
> and now making a statement which jolts. It is a kind of voyeurism the
> narrator watching a couple's behaviour in the museum and describing the
> events that occur but still the reader is left to make their own
judgement.
> I like both forms of poetry. It is all about observation I think but in
> differant ways. Hope this makes sense. I like your poem. Sally J
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