I like your poem about cricket although not a cricket fan myself. The poem
captures the tenseness involved in cricket and the exitement too. It flows
so well and I like the way it half rhymes "glimmer and weather" and also the
alliteration which gives the poem added "bounce""battling back boned".
"drowning defeat" "creases cratered and scarred" really adds to the
tenseness involved in the game. Your poem will maybe encourage me to watch
cricket more. bw Sally J
>From: "Merritt, Matt - Leic. Mercury"
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>Subject: New sub: Last Man
>Date: Wed, 21 Jul 2004 16:27:41 +0100
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>Apologies to any of you who hate cricket, or just cricket poems.
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>
>Last Man
>
>No chance now, not so much as a glimmer,
>and no use relying on the English weather.
>This is his summer - not the poets' spell
>cast by white-clad ritual, but the long walk
>from a dressing room thick with sweat, steam
>and the slow afternoon's deep heat,
>arriving at a crease cratered and scarred,
>team-mates already drowning defeat,
>lights showing bright from the Welfare's bar.
>
>Then the urge to go down all guns blazing,
>bat flailing through the frantic arc from
>desperate to glorious, but each week instead
>this same stonewall stand. The stained
>Gunn and Moore snug in his hands, full face
>flush against out-thrust pad. Batting back bored
>looks from beneath the gathered baseball caps.
>And walking off again unconquered, intact.
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