Thanks Sally!
I'll do something about annually, I dcant really think how it got there!
bw
SAllyE
on 17/7/04 3:42 am, Sally James at [log in to unmask] wrote:

> Hi Sally E
>
> I like this poem it is like a stream of consciousness to me. It is as if
> thoughts are flowing in and out of your mind whilst travelling. I like
> "ribbon with my mist" it is as if you are wrapping up your memories. Which
> for me goes with weave and you do mention spin as well. And I also like
> "Sleeve of time" as if you are carrying not your heart on your sleeve but
> your memories. A very dreamy and wistful poem for me. The only jarring word
> for me is "annually" bw Sally J
>
>
>> From: Sally Evans <[log in to unmask]>
>> Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>> To: [log in to unmask]
>> Subject: New sub: Mist
>> Date: Fri, 16 Jul 2004 17:52:59 +0100
>>
>> Mist
>>
>> In the skirt of the highlands
>> caught in the weave of my mind
>> I pick dahlias in a field
>> hidden in outer London.
>> High, dry white stone walls
>> stalk between Yorkshire and Cumbria.
>> Northern Italy spins in, sprigged
>> with hill villages. Wine
>> flows, past and present, annually.
>>
>> Unfold the places for people!
>> Hands on a driving wheel,
>> friends who walk and talk
>> in a sleeve of time,
>> I ribbon with my mist.
>>
>> Sally Evans
>
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