Many thanks Sally, like you I have a fund of poems that see the air every
now and then. This is recent and from the note book I carry everywhere. Glad
you essentially liked it.
bw
James
>From: Sally James <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub: Lifelong Learning
>Date: Thu, 10 Jun 2004 18:31:24 +0100
>
>Hi James I have only just got around to reading this poem sorry. I agree
>with the sentiments here as I know quite a few inteligent women who bury
>their heads in romance novels. I think the poem could be improved with
>some
>editting here and there to make the poem more succinct and sharper to get
>this point across. Bw Sally J
>
>
>>From: James Bell <[log in to unmask]>
>>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>>To: [log in to unmask]
>>Subject: New sub: Lifelong Learning
>>Date: Thu, 3 Jun 2004 11:40:52 +0000
>>
>>LIFELONG LEARNING
>>
>>On fine days she sits on a bench by the river
>>at a point sheltered from cool breezes
>>and reads books all to do with romance;
>>no self-improving tomes, unless
>>the many ways to pant beneath a dark
>>and mysterious Heathcliffe like hero
>>counts as credits for keyskills and life
>>affirming. The suspicion is that the skill
>>is basic and the need constant,
>>the place and time to practice important,
>>as is the teamwork of the two involved.
>>So, on fine days, she sits on a bench
>>by the river and laps up the advanced
>>theory elements and results of advances made.
>>
>>
>>bw
>>James
>>
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