Thank you Grassy.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 06/03/2004 4:40:08 AM, [log in to unmask]
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<< Dear Ryfkah,
I don't think we need to be told that a cemetery is a monument to death- I
think that's a given.
I hesitate to mention this issue again, but I do think this poem would be
greatly improved by standard punctuation.
I call Men Women...
That threw me right out of the poem, and it's not what you want a reader to
read, but there it is on the page. This is the sort of thing that
punctuation was invented to prevent, I think.
Kind regards,
grasshopper
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