Thank you Sally for your thoughtful comments; cemeteries like golf courses
are all grass which is green.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 06/02/2004 1:53:29 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< This poem paints a vivid picture of the suffering of the soldiers and
combined with the simplicity of the daisies it is makes a very poignant
piece of writing. It could maybe do with a little editting here here and
there not so sure about the third line in the first stanza "the green" has
me a little puzzled. Sally J
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