Hi all,
Calaya and Helen, I think you're right that using the limeric form is fun,
but this particular poem will work better as ballad.
Also, the bonkers I rattled off probably could be improved fairly quickly
with a little thought. I pretty much used every (non-dialect) word I could
think of for my letters combination.
I've not yet had chance to look at either again properly, so they can stay
in the "For Editing" folder until I have.
Regards,
Russ
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