Hi Sue,
Thank you for the kind comments and I'm glad you liked it. I think I agree
that "light on the matter" needs to go, but I sort of think the other cliché
needs to be there.
Regards,
Matt
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I love this poem. I would try to eliminate a couple of cliches: "light on
the matter" and "call it a day." Otherwise, a touching and skillful poem.
Sue
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