Thanks Ryfkah glad you like it but will amend slightly after hearing some
other crits Thanks Sally J
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: new sub Nanny and the Archers
>Date: Sun, 23 May 2004 09:13:56 EDT
>
>In a message dated 05/23/2004 3:05:31 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
>
><< and the sun set his fixed stare
>
>through the front window >>
>
>I like the personification here and the narrative flows..
>
>kol tuv, Ryfkah
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