> Hello Calaya,
Thanks for your feedback and suggestions on this one.
Best wishes, Mike
>
> Mike wrote:
>
> Clairvoyance
>
> It was like learning to read
> all over again. The most ordinary
> words, like `spam? and `bank?
> were pregnant with new meaning.
>
> Clairvoyance must be something like this,
> she thought, stepping into the house
> and hearing sounds that had died
> some hours before.
>
> The chairs stated their position with force,
> offering a seat in clarification,
> the curtains held a rush of air
> in their folds that murmured to her.
>
> As a child she had dreamed
> of a mirror that recorded on its surface
> every image it had ever reflected
> and the power that would give over things.
> *****
> Hi Mike,
> I like this. Just for the fun of it, you might try reading it with the Ss rearranged as below. (doesn't change how i translate it or the nit pics i'd have, either way, but it might make an easier path to follow? Make sense?) AND THANKS for letting me play.
>
> Clairvoyance
>
> As a child she had dreamed
> of a mirror that recorded on its surface
> every image it had ever reflected
> and the power that would give over things.
>
> Clairvoyance must be something like this,
> she thought, stepping into the house
> and hearing sounds that had died
> some hours before.
>
> The chairs stated their position with force,
> offering a seat in clarification,
> the curtains held a rush of air
> in their folds that murmured to her.
>
> It was like learning to read
> all over again. The most ordinary
> words, like `spam? and `bank?
> were pregnant with new meaning.
> ******
> later,
> calaya
>
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