> Hello Sally,
Many thanks for your feedback on this one. As you remark, words can have different meanings and never is this more so than in the case when one person is deliberately trying to deceive and mislead another. I imagine how the realisation of this deceit might come as something of a revelation almost akin to a sense of clairvoyance. It would also be nice if I could persuade myself that this poem communicates that....I´m working on it (the persuasion, I mean....the poem´s finished);-)
Best wishes, Mike
>
> Hmmm Clairvoyance is a good title a little unsure about the contents of the
> poem but guess this means guessing and making assumptions on what might have
> been. Spam and bank and pregnant together make me think of sperm banks and
> there being other meanings to words. Sally J
>
>
> >From: Mike Horwood <[log in to unmask]>
> >Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
> >To: [log in to unmask]
> >Subject: New sub: Clairvoyance
> >Date: Mon, 17 May 2004 11:21:41 +0300
> >
> >Clairvoyance
> >
> >It was like learning to read
> >all over again. The most ordinary
> >words, like `spam´ and `bank´
> >were pregnant with new meaning.
> >
> >Clairvoyance must be something like this,
> >she thought, stepping into the house
> >and hearing sounds that had died
> >some hours before.
> >
> >The chairs stated their position with force,
> >offering a seat in clarification,
> >the curtains held a rush of air
> >in their folds that murmured to her.
> >
> >As a child she had dreamed
> >of a mirror that recorded on its surface
> >every image it had ever reflected
> >and the power that would give over things.
> >
> >
> >
> >Mike
>
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