and dither at nothing meaningful as if the second
coming is right around the corner and we are left
behind as if we picked up the soap.
gary
lots to identify with here, gary, and lots to like.
the above bit, the end, strong. great image. love it.
am uncomfortable with some of ur line break choices,
but that may just be me, or i've just read too long
today. will have another read on it tomorrow, or
later. reminds me very much, the first S, of what i
look forward to. i know, it's weird, but after*
breakup! breakup for me, after all these years, has
become a joy just cause of the spring seasons
expectations.
later
calaya
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