Hi cjw,
Why sorry? The title is not suitable; I agree.
At times choosing a title becomes a difficult task.
Your comments are encouraging for me. ~ c s shah
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hi again, c s,
thnaks, really. the sorry because i'm still nervous
doing the crit thingy. i've not a lot of experience,
imho, and only a little formal poetic education, so i
often doubt what skills i may have. i feel less apt
with titles, lately, than i have in the past, but
guess it's a good thing to pay attention to,too. and
i'm very glad that my comments are encouraging. I can
sure use all the encouragement i can get,and you've do
so, here.
later
calaya
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