But then I get a bit lost:
"the second and third moments
short of a long eternity."
doesn't make much sense to me. I've been trying to get things to work here,
but I can't!
The first line takes forever,
>the second and third moments
>short of a long eternity.
Bob, forever is forever, but is a moment short of eternity less than
forever?
Line 1 comes hard. Are 2 and 3 a bit less difficult?
Thanks much.
Gary
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