Gee thanks Bob, a red ribbon it shall be then. SallyJ



>From: Bob Cooper <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub returned to sender
>Date: Tue, 20 Apr 2004 16:27:32 +0000
>
>Hi Sally,
>This is great!
>Beneath it's wackiness I enjoy what I'm finding, too: Christian symbols of
>eggs and fish, the relationship between the people, the distances in the
>poem, the warmth of an fresh egg and the coldness of a fish... and much,
>much else!
>I'd say "a red ribbon" and not "a ribbon of red" because it sounds less
>poetic, more like how we say things...
>I like it!
>Bob
>
>
>>From: Sally James <[log in to unmask]>
>>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>>To: [log in to unmask]
>>Subject: New sub returned to sender
>>Date: Thu, 15 Apr 2004 13:18:12 +0100
>>
>>Returned to sender
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>>It is Easter and I wanted to give you an egg
>>a chocolate one, wrapped in silver, tied with a ribbon of red (with a red
>>ribbon)
>>and for your breakfast, an egg, newly laid
>>still warm from the hen
>>But because I don't see you anymore
>>I will give you a fish instead
>>I bought one fresh from the market this morning
>>Its eyes are bright and its scales jeweled with sea (eyes ARE bright/were
>>bright? Interesting...)
>>It smelled of oceans and coconut islands
>>when I sent it today
>>I wrapped it in foil with kisses and love
>>You should recieve it soon
>>But someone said you had gone away for a week.
>>
>>Sally james
>>
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