Hi Helen I was not so sure about this one, it didn't say much to me. It
seems to be written in an unfamiliar form a bit like an hiaku but with more
words if you what I mean so please forgive me but I jiggled the words about
and then I got the message hmm so clever you are.
Fenceless
The end terrace
whose fence blew down
has a slate plaque by the door
someone painted it
with red and yellow tulips
like those in the garden
enjoying more sun.
>From: Helen Clare <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New Sub: fenceless
>Date: Mon, 19 Apr 2004 20:11:34 +0100
>
>Fenceless
>
>The end terrace whose fence blew down last month
>has a small slate welcome plaque by the door -
>
>someone has painted it with red tulips and daffodils
>like the ones in the garden, enjoying more sun.
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