Hi Helen,
This poem invites me to imagine/create a world where such a relationship
happens. It succeeds. It's plain matter of fact language is striking,
unforgettable, powerful.
I sometimes wonder if "rolled" is the right word? I don't know enough about
bondage to know how apt the word is!
Bob
>From: Helen Clare <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New Sub: Bondage
>Date: Thu, 8 Jan 2004 08:08:42 -0000
>
>Bondage.
>
>After all the kinks we've rolled through
>we reach the last - yours to zip
>and leave and mine to slit
>my chest and hold the flaps apart for you
>
>Helen Clare
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