Ryfkah, Sally, Matt,
Thanks so much for your comments.
This one was written very quickly.. I'm on a small poetryboard where the ISP
identifier is switched off every Thursday and we all post one or 2 poems
anonymously, and try and guess the authors. It's all great fun.We tend to
write new poems very quickly to post, which is quite a good exercise, I
think.
Matt, re the ampersands- they're a bit of an in-joke on the other board and
I meant to remove them before posting the poem to the Works - but forgot.
Kind regards,
grasshopper
----- Original Message -----
From: "Ryfkah *" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Friday, April 16, 2004 3:44 AM
Subject: Re: [THE-WORKS] New sub : Archery
> In a message dated 04/15/2004 11:58:11 AM,
> [log in to unmask] writes:
>
> << & do not touch the bowstring. I have eaten
>
> your arrows one by one. Their tips porcupine
>
> my guts. Their shafts are leaks in my heart. >>
>
> I would the poem to end I have eatenyour arrows one by one. This does
> destroy the three-line stanza though.
>
> kol tuv, Ryfkah
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