Oh crikey Ryfkah. How peceptive of you to see all of this. Actually the fish
is a but a fish and the egg but an egg and the title is wrong. I am going
through a confused state at the moment and my thought processes are
entangled. Like a fish in a net I suppose
I didn't know the fish was a sign of death but do know that the egg is
sigificant with fertility. I just thought of wanting to give someone I love
an Easter egg but being a bit liike the woman scorned thought I would send a
fish instead. Thanks for your constructive crits Sally J
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub returned to sender
>Date: Thu, 15 Apr 2004 12:13:47 EDT
>
>Okay, I get into the egg images and then shift to a fish, which, btw, is
>beautifully written. I just don't get the significance. Is the fish like
>in The
>Godfather a sign of death? Is the egg like in the Passover service a sign
>of
>rebirth and spring renewal? Or is the egg but an egg and the fish but a
>fish?
> And, because of the title, does the fish come back?
>
>kol tuv, Ryfkah
>
>
>In a message dated 04/15/2004 5:30:41 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
>
><< Returned to sender
>
>It is Easter and I wanted to give you an egg
>a chocolate one, wrapped in silver, tied with a ribbon of red
>and for your breakfast, an egg, newly laid
>still warm from the hen
>But because I don't see you anymore
>I will give you a fish instead
>I bought one fresh from the market this morning
>Its eyes are bright and its scales jeweled with sea
>It smelled of oceans and coconut islands
>when I sent it today
>I wrapped it in foil with kisses and love
>You should recieve it soon
>But someone said you had gone away for a week. >>
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