Yes you are right Grassy. These are just random images that came to my mind
about despair. I am trying to get back into writing something meaningful. I
need to be more disiplined you are right in pointing this out. Sally J
>From: grasshopper <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: new sub letting go
>Date: Wed, 14 Apr 2004 12:37:37 +0100
>
>Dear Sally,
>
>My problem with this is that I can't see how that images you choose refer
>to
>'letting go', or not....
>They read rather like a random list of Poetic cliches to me. Am I missing
>something?
>
>Kind regards,
> grasshopper
>
>----- Original Message -----
>From: "Sally James" <[log in to unmask]>
>To: <[log in to unmask]>
>Sent: Wednesday, April 14, 2004 11:59 AM
>Subject: [THE-WORKS] new sub letting go
>
>
> > Letting go
> >
> > I can't let go
> > I am the wind
> > catching it's breath on a hot day
> > the moon dropping through a curl of cloth
> > a silver coin tossed in a black hole
> > rain around a red rainbow
> > the sun melting on a lake of ice.
> >
> > sally james
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