Shalom King Arthur,
I really like this poem; you always write fine poetry in my eyes. I like the
way atmosphere is created through vivid images. I also like the personal
nature of the narration. Though, I do ask myself is the gull's sound a mockery
of Easter day or the rainy day with overtone of winter still present in the
spring air.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 04/12/2004 11:04:06 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
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In the churchyard thrift trembles,
litter swirls. A gull jubilates
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