In a message dated 04/09/2004 1:20:47 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< and it was you who was me having a birthday
and neither you, who will, nor me, who will not feel old,
opening this year's easter eggs, silently. >>
I enjoyed the layers in this one and its emotional center. Rings authentic;
makes this reader be in the poem.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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