Hi Sally
This is charming - simple and touching. I totally identify with the
sentiment here - but am I'm afraid cynical enough to question whether daffs
really do come in pairs - though they do I admit have the dubious priviledge
of having the male and female together in the one flower.
Possibly one of the first three line not really needed. Just a tidgy thing
that occurs to me - and possibly I'm interfering in your poem and deserve to
be told to go away -  the lines seem to come in threes in this poem. Maybe
they should come in twos as well.
Helen


----- Original Message -----
From: "Sally James" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Tuesday, March 30, 2004 1:32 PM
Subject: New sub Seeing Double


> Seeing Double
>
> Today I am seeing double
> there are two of everything
> everywhere there are couples
> male and female
> him and her
> he and she
> even the daffodils come in pairs
> and I am me
> alone not free.
>
> Sally James
>
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