Hi Frances,
Thanks for your positive comment. That's a little reassuring. It's funny how
the sense of 'touch' with regard to whether the writing is going well, or
poorly, can become a deserter, almost overnight.
Glad you enjoyed. The narrator has reached a stage for reflection, rather
than renewal. It's a realisation born of being alone.
Cheers,
Frank
> Not so fast Frank, I protest complete dismissal of this work. My first
> response was not teenaged angst, but instead mature adult understanding
and
> a renewal of tenderness after many years together. Such feelings are not
> the exclusive domain of teenaged lovers, to think so is in itself aging;
> their expression may be clumsy but yours is not. Frances
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