Thanks Tamara I have only just seen this Sorry about the bad spelling Sally
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>From: tammara <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: new poem deception
>Date: Fri, 12 Mar 2004 10:52:56 +0200
>
>Hi Sally
>I liked your poem and identified with it completely - I'm at that stage in
>my life... just one thing - you left out the "h" from the "where empty
>promises bleed"
>All the best
>Tammara
>
>visit my web site: www.poetrylover.info
>
>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: The Pennine Poetry Works [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf
>Of Sally James
>Sent: Thursday, March 11, 2004 10:59 PM
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: new poem deception
>
>Deception
>
>Deception tastes like a worn out sponge
>it wipes the spit from the corner of
>the mouth were kisses drip
>mops the hollows of eyes were
>salt lakes collect
>but inside were empty promises bleed
>it can never reach.
>
>sally james
>
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