> Hello John,
I´m not clear whether this/these should be read as one piece or separately. The single title seems to imply the former. I don´t, on first reading, find much connection between them. That may be my obtuseness, of course. Or it may be that connections are not required. Either way, this reader felt a bit out of it.
Best wishes, Mike
> Lähettäjä: Carley <[log in to unmask]>
> Päiväys: 2004/03/13 la PM 12:07:51 GMT+02:00
> Vastaanottaja: [log in to unmask]
> Aihe: Tobacco Road, part one
>
> somewhere
> down Tobacco Road
> Mona's jiving
> with the moon
>
> please don't drop
> that chouzubachi
> on my toe
>
> in the main
> the haikai spirit
> is opposed
> to artifice
>
> her cleavage
> rather deeper
> than his glass
>
> round the town
> a sticky plum bun
> a pig
> led off to market
>
> so clever
> they've forgotten
> how to pray
>
> * * *
>
>
>
> all comment and crits welcome (s'long as they are unfailingly
> complimentary)
>
> Best wishes, john e c
>
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