Hi Sally
I liked your poem and identified with it completely - I'm at that stage in
my life... just one thing - you left out the "h" from the "where empty
promises bleed"
All the best
Tammara
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From: The Pennine Poetry Works [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf
Of Sally James
Sent: Thursday, March 11, 2004 10:59 PM
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Subject: new poem deception
Deception
Deception tastes like a worn out sponge
it wipes the spit from the corner of
the mouth were kisses drip
mops the hollows of eyes were
salt lakes collect
but inside were empty promises bleed
it can never reach.
sally james
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