or try 'it will be your own'
This would fo further to avoid the echo of the usually comic common phrase
in English:
"One day all this will be yours, my son" or similar.
Leona
>From: "david.bircumshaw" <[log in to unmask]>
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>Date: Wed, 4 Feb 2004 10:36:34 -0000
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>Interesting little discussion this, my suggestion would be, for what it's
>worth, that the poet uses ellipsis so that one has, at the end:
>
>'it will be your ....'
>
>leaving grammar and the reader happily hanging on the edge.
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