Hi Jen
Good points:
Pages small enough to be seen on a low res screen without having to scroll
around. (not that I personally have a low res screen you understand)
Straightforward navigation
Does what it says on the tin.
3 minor suggestions:
/About - the section beginning 'We can't promise miracles' is virtually
unreadable on my (LCD) monitor due to it being written in light earwax brown
on a very light earwax background. It's not like you to go for subdued
pastel shades ;-)
Ditto your URL, though I guess if they've got that far, they don't need it.
Secondly, the pictures - a bit of a contrast between the heavily tattooed
chap and the nice girl trying on a jumper. That may be deliberate, but it
distracted me from the text.
Georgia as a font looks trendy, but somebody whose head isn't quite together
might have trouble taking down your telephone number with the variation in
height of the different digits.
Good luck
Mike
www.equip.ac.uk
-----Original Message-----
From: Jenny [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
Sent: 15 October 2004 09:58
To: [log in to unmask]
Subject: new site
Would be interested in any comments from the clan on the first stage of me
new site. Just so as I can get anything added or amended if needed.
Stage 2 will be finished in a couple of weeks but any comments will be very
gratefully accepted to save me having to have a stage 3!
www.thelifebackclinic.co.uk
Jenski
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I cant remember writing this email.
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