From: "david.bircumshaw" <[log in to unmask]>
Subject: Maudlin' Regets
Like the pun (or ambiguity?) in the title here, dave.
> I woke with a hangover about
Do you need "about" here?
> the size of Wales, Dylan Thomas
'Twere me, I'd drop-and-incent "Dylan Thomas" -- but that's me
> had drunk in every bar in it
> that night.
>
> Wrote on a note
> 'girlfiend' by mistake, think
> that that
>
> ol' debill he be in me, to be
> true
>
> wouldthatIcouldotherbenot
> like me
Like the shift(s) in register in the two above stanzas.
Like it, dave.
Cheers,
Robin
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