Hi Colin,
Ouch! "universal mind" rid yourself of it. S2 seems to start awkwardly and
doesn't make sense to me.
bw
James
>From: Colin dewar <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: new sub /stars
>Date: Fri, 14 Feb 2003 18:44:16 -0000
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>Reflection
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>Writing by the mirror,
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>I find hieroglyphics
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>flowing from my hand,
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>tapping perfect knowledge
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>from some universal mind.
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>Seems the more wise by far,
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>the logos in the glass
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>than these grounded lines
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>whose ends stop here
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>with the indefinable stars.
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