DC offered some great suggstions that I'll probably adopt.
bw
James
>From: Christina Fletcher <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub: History
>Date: Tue, 11 Feb 2003 12:02:18 EST
>
>Mmm, I wonder how this would be if you changed the line breaks so that it
>read more smoothly, James?
>bw
>christina
>
>
> > HISTORY
> >
> > History was not of interest
> > until some was made
> > and the notion clung to that
> > there was a past beyond
> > this personal one, then,
> > somebody said if you
> > concentrate on the past
> > and present you miss out
> > on the future again and again
> > though there remains
> > the question of now -
> > this present that becomes
> > past while each second
> > passes as these words
> > are written and move
> > continuously into the future.
> >
> >
> >
> > bw
> > James
> >
>
>
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