I think there is an awful lot said in these few lines, Even the title has
intense meaning, I agree with Tamara in some respects that the words can be
manipulated even more to make the poem even sharper
Will can be cast iron in some people a strengh to be admired. The metaphors
of rock and sand for men and women is excellent. I like this poem a lot
short and succinct which says so much. Sally J
>From: "D.C Bursey" <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Open hands help, open minds free
>Date: Sat, 4 Jan 2003 16:33:33 -0330
>
>A rock is not
> a man,
>a woman
>is not sand,
>concrete,
> is not as hard
> as will.
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