Hi James I am interested in the notion of time. This poem says a lot but is
a bit jumbled. It could do with editing to become more succinct to get the
concept across clearer, BW Sally
>From: James Bell <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New sub: History
>Date: Sat, 8 Feb 2003 12:16:45 +0000
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>This is a piece that has been lurking in my notebook but which I've done
>nothing with. I'd be interested in some C&C.
>
>HISTORY
>
>History was not of interest
>until some was made
>and the notion clung to that
>there was a past beyond
>this personal one, then,
>somebody said if you
>concentrate on the past
>and present you miss out
>on the future again and again
>though there remains
>the question of now -
>this present that becomes
>past while each second
>passes as these words
>are written and move
>continuously into the future.
>
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>
>bw
>James
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