computer crashed so this is a second run at this....
I am more used to concept of missing the moment by dwelling on past or
future so this is a potentially new angle.
Am too tempted to not suggest different line breaks.. as per below...
Having done that I realise I have simply turned it into 4 statements - which
I guess lacks poeticality! - (doubt such a word exists)
Hope my response is not too basic or churlish.
Tony
----- Original Message -----
From: "James Bell" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Saturday, February 08, 2003 12:16 PM
Subject: New sub: History
> This is a piece that has been lurking in my notebook but which I've done
> nothing with. I'd be interested in some C&C.
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History
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History was not of interest
until some was made and the notion clung to
that there was a past beyond this personal one.
Then somebody said
if you concentrate on the past and present
you miss out on the future again and again.
Though there remains the question of now.
This present that becomes past
while each second passes as these words
are written and move continuously into the future.
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> bw
> James
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