I've risked going for a few straight amendments Sally, which are of course
in the spirit of this group, thoughts and suggestions for your
consideration.
Tony
>Weather's Ballads
>
>Wind all day, rain around the country -
>a traveller from Oban saying, "wild",
>a message from Skye before a thunderstorm.
>In Callander, it rained in sweeping bands
>between refreshed clear intervals,
>but the storm skirted, never came our way,
>till now in brilliant moonlight
>shadows race eagerly as clouds,
>bare woods roar in excitement,
>branches howl like animals,
>evergreen helmets romp and sough,
the weather herself sings ballads.
(as/while) under the trees' moon shadows
humble listeners cower
>>
>Sally Evans
>
>
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