Philip, here
with a return ticket, pinned
to grandmother's bodice
loose as tug-smoke on her.
She's hitched from Gdansk
to research "social interaction
in English elevators".
fine lines and such a notion for a study, but the end disappointed
yet hosts a disappointment
that breaks over the full harbour
of your heart.
the last line too soft?
Thanks.
Gary
Jan Jenifer Lawrence at: http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html ---
Writer's Hood at http://www.writershood.com/... Poets for Peace.... ˇPoemas
sí, balas no!
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