Sally, well done. A couple of comments if you please:
As great cliffs rise round Iceland, so
they tower round Scotland's northern isles (perhaps something else for the
second round)
The ropes were cut and twisted. Men (not sure of these kind of line breaks)
Thanks.
Gary
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