My first this year. Could be my last. Who knows? It not in a final form so
comments are welcome. Text format is difficult to form into something more
concrete (no reference to a certain type of poetry intended).
CROSSROADS
A blue tit heard the flute pitch
through windscreen glass
as you watched each other listen over the ditch,
a chasm each instinct of the other said
could not be crossed.
You do not care for darkness
and your eyes swallow whole
the antics of the small bird outside
as he brightens up your day
in the brief midday sunlight
as both respond in different ways
to the Mozart concerto being played on Classic FM
It crosses your mind that as the
twenty-first century gets underway
how poetry from the last
is still being assessed -
it crosses your mind in the same way
as the flute crosses the mind
of your little buddy the blue tit
who assessed Mozart in an instant
though between the three
only Mozart's combination of notes
are the constants here - for
your mind flits free like the bird
that soon disappears and leaves
you with your thoughts as they
appear at the crossroads you sit near
bw
James
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