'I got to stop trying write my dreams into poems'
no, I disagree
you need to keep doing it.
just don't expect to get all of an REM stage into one poem
and, like a lucid dreamer, learn to manipulate the images - make the dream
into a poem, then write it
Terri )O(
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Sent: 24 January 2003 22:42
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Subject: Re: The edge of silence-terri
Terri
Thanks for your comments
I got to stop trying write my dreams into poems
I see in the rest I've been repeating the same feelings
~*~
It is that stormy and cold here tonight
the wood-horse is trying to get into the barn! ... lol
davidc
alderoak wrote:
> Blades talk to me
> whisper silently
> what is the point.
>
> this stanza is a poem in itself
>
> as for the rest of the cutlery, it reminds me of my own. It feels
important
> to keep it, but what is it for?
>
> Terri )O(
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