Arthur, with the title Christmas Shopping, I wonder if I and II are in the
right place or should be part of the poem at all. ii could stand alone, but
to get into the work quickly you might start with iii and move ii after the
current iv with I dropped.
iv is the best to me, followed by v
Thanks.
Gary
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