Hi,
Thanks for the feedback. I'll give it some thought
Matt
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From: calaya [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
Sent: 05 December 2003 21:47
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Subject: Re: New sub: Holiday
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hello,
this certainly speaks loudly of disharmony, overall,
but I think the shock & awe line distracts.
regards
calaya
HOLIDAY
Inside, in air-conditioned half-light, we whisper
wide-eyed before a glimpse of Eadfrith's God.
Each word a wound on Satan's body.
This is shock and awe.
Outside, and the same hand has not been idle.
Jets cross-carpet the sky, each initialling
flawless lapis lazuli. London stretches, sighs.
And there is more, much more.
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