> Hello Ryfkah,
Many thanks for your feedback. Vivid and atmospheric description is one of the things I was after at this point sio it´s encouraging to learn that it comes across that way.
Best wishes, Mike
> Lähettäjä: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
> Päiväys: 2003/11/27 to AM 06:35:19 GMT+02:00
> Vastaanottaja: [log in to unmask]
> Aihe: Re: New sub: Domestic geography
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> In a message dated 11/26/2003 12:43:54 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
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> > On a polished table the vase stands;
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> > red roses lend to a cool room
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> > an opulence and elegance.
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> > The dark wood, in places, shines
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> > like water where it catches light. >>
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> What vivid description, like a painting with words!
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> kol tuv, Ryfkah
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