Frank, damn this is a tough read. Isn't this the third year in a row?
here
my old home
is burning
on fire
I would drop is burning
I wonder if this
and now it is mount buffalo in the air
I can taste it
Victoria is burning and remnants
from an acreage of flame
have shrouded melbourne
like a smog that is the land
I can taste Mount Buffalo,
Victoria burning, Melbourne
shrouded with smoke
like smog is now the land
though you can do better.
Thanks.
Gary
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sí, balas no!
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