Helen,
I appreciate this enough that I've read it several
times today. Still, the last line, "without context,"
seems an intrusion to me and the Package, i think,
loses focus with it's use. REThink that line?
calaya
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Packaging
When your book arrives, in a Post-Pak
corrugated card that slots together
time and time again,
I think of love, and wombs; the dried pea
of your childhood self rattling around
without context.
Helen Clare
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