atom bomb, entrails, glints in her eye.
shark fin soup shining in a moondance
of atoms, entrails, dancing moonlight
screen, fan, atom girl.
Paul, an interesting read, but I wonder if you could spread it out a bit,
more white space.
Please check puncuation.
Smiles and thanks.
Gary
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