Perhaps - Tis time for a list -
by saying another you refer to a previous poem, making this one less self
sufficient.
SallyE
Sally, been penning two many list poems lately, so Friday at the venue I
whipped out this one - indeed another. But thinking on the change.
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> and why does he wear
> galoshes to wade puddles
> left after last night's rain.
these lines are weak.
c s shah
CS, minor? Smiles. I like the absurdity of the question. Barefoot, in
slippers or even regular shoes might make sense, but galoshes are what he
should wear.
But as always, thinking.
Thanks for the read, guys.
Gary
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