With egress to the avenue, these royal heirs of
Pamperdom walk their walkers.
Annabelle, sorry but the work is whay to prosey for me. Whatever poetry is,
this is borderline to me. Part of the reason is the linebreaks as of above
or in later. Part is form. Here
Some say they resemble their masters.
In a manner of speaking, but whose talking? Noone is talking.
They aren't talking.
we might see
Some say they resemble their masters.
In a manner of speaking, but who's talking?
Noone is talking.
They aren't talking.
more white space to create tension
Sorry, good luck.
Smiles.
Gary
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