Yeah, it doesn't seem to work. I was hoping someone could see something in
it, but I think I try to do much with to little.
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From: The Pennine Poetry Works [mailto:[log in to unmask]]On
Behalf Of paul murphy
Sent: Thursday, November 06, 2003 12:09 PM
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Subject: Re: New Sub: Poodles' Bling Bling
a strange poem which doesn't seem to say much
I also tried a Dachshund poem, it didn't say much either. save yer doggy
poems for the children's poetry section of the bookstore. but maybe this is
a children's poem, or a teenagers?
best wishes,
Paul Murphy
>From: Annabelle Baptista <[log in to unmask]>
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>Subject: New Sub: Poodles' Bling Bling
>Date: Thu, 6 Nov 2003 11:34:06 -0500
>
>Poodles’ bling bling
>
>In the Mansion of the Dog Star the poodles blink,
>Blink in their bling, bling.
>Their bloodline as thin as the blank stare of any
>Ivy leaguer in lettered sweater. Carrying papers,
>of lineage, and privilege, Skipper, Rex,
>Madge and Winkie hold court.
>
>With egress to the avenue, these royal heirs of
>Pamperdom walk their walkers.
>Piddle in poopers carried through palaces and presidential suites.
>This breeds’ haunches are higher
>Their intelligence, scientifically proven.
>
>In the evening, they look up from their carriers in
>upscale restaurants at anorexic models sniffing saccharine
>drinks blowing kisses at their coddled toy, miniature, minions,
>sitting in Hermes carriers, wearing Gucci sweaters
>
>They are registered for silverware and place sets,
>They are given maids whose backgrounds have
>Foreign names to feed them biscuits from flaky fingertips.
>To preheat the cream. Some say they resemble their masters.
>In a manner of speaking, but whose talking? Noone is talking.
>They aren’t talking.
>
>Annabelle Baptista
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